Di, 17. Mai 2005, 19:12
Was mir beim Überfliegen aufgefallen ist:
Zwischenüberschrift: "Aller Anfang ist Schwer"
"schwer" klein schreiben
Bildunterschrift: Questgeber, deren Aufträge noch zu schwer für Sie sind haben ein grauen Ausrufezeichen über dem Kopf"
Komma hinter "sind"
Ansonsten sieht's gut aus.
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Leland Yee, the Senator that decided that violent videogames were so dangerous to society that he needed to propose a law that banned selling them to minors, was arrested recently for weapons trafficking. He was buying shoulder-mounted rocket launchers from an extremist Islamic group and accidentally sold them to a member of the FBI. I mean, thank God he doesn't play videogames or he might have really become a threat to society.
-- Extra Credits Episode 200